Thursday, 27 February 2014

Textiles ; Tribal Research Presentation Evaluation + Peer Assessment


Tribal Research Project Evaluation

 

 

For this project I Researched the following tribes ;The Mongolian Tribes , The Massai Tribe ,The Aztecs and the American Indian Tribes .I chose these tribes because I found them the most visually interesting . The sources I used ; 

                      http://www.bbc.co.uk/tribe/tribes/darhad/

                      http://www.mongolian-art.de/01_mongolian_art/gallery_gods_buddha/index.htm

                     http://www.maasai-association.org/ceremonies.html

                     http://www.denverartmuseum.org/collections/american-indian-art

                     http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8YR2FgxalCU

                     http://bonniebutterfield.com/indian-culture.htm

                      http://www.gatheringofnations.com/educational/powwow_dancers/JingleDress.htm

                     http://www.gatheringofnations.com/photos/index.htm#2013_



                       

I also used this book ;  NATIONS of the WORLD – Mexico

And I visited The Manchester Museum

 

 

Problems faced

Time management ; Time management the biggest problem I had , I struggled on hitting my target of 20 recreations because some recreations took longer than others , I over came this problem by giving myself 2 hours maximum per recreation .

Recreations ; I wanted to make each recreation unique by using different techniques on each recreation . However I ran out of techniques , I over came this problem by being more creative and experimental with my resources and by making new techniques , for example I used bonda web and cotton pads to make fabric .

Sources ; I struggled to find reliable information on some of the tribes, because little is known about some of the tribes and also because I couldnt find many books which had information which suited the information I wanted to know .

 

 

five things that went well

                     I was confident during the presentation.

                     I had good knowledge on the subject .

                     I was experimental and creative with my recreations .

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five things I want to improve

                     I need to give my work stronger links

                     I need to learn the names of my techniques

                     I need to learn to bullet point rather than use big blocks of writing on the presentation

                     I should look at the audience more

                     The quality of my recreations (I should be more creative . )

 

time management

                     My time management was not very well planned , towards the end of the week I hardly slept because I had too much to catch up on . The main reason for my bad time management issue was distractions caused by family issues raised during the course of the last week ; however I did finish my work on time for the due presentation date . However because I didnt allow myself enough time to create good quality recreations I have to now make more so that it does not have a trical down affect on the next steps of this project .

 

health safety

Risks ;

Sewing machine; needle snapped and flicked on my face . In the future I will make sure that my sewing machine is set up correctly and that there is not too much tention on the fred .

 

Other risks were ; Hot iron , sharp embroidery needles , spray adhesive (solvent) , I was careful with all these risks and avoided injury to myself and the people around me .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How Effective Was The Power Point ?

Some things my peers raised about the effectiveness of my power point ;

                     Good images / Compared well

                     You need to use bullet points to demonstrate your points rather than blocks of text .

                     It was effective because you did good research .

                     Excellent .

                     Detailed and comprehensive.

I agree that I need to develop my skills when it comes to shortening text to bullet points . I will make this apart of my action plan .

 

 

How Effective Was The Delivery Of The Presentation?

Some points my peers raised about the delivery of my presentation ;

                     Very good with clear demonstration .

                     The delivery was effective because you explained it well .

                     Use more images on slides to make the presentation more interesting .

                     Detailed and interesting .

                     Good use of annotations towards presentation .

I agree with all of the above , looking at this feedback I think that I did well on the delivery of the presentation . However , I think that if I had rehearsed it more , then it would have been more interesting and also if I had included more images .

 

Was the Presentation Well Planned ?

                     Looks a little rushed , however you have a good understanding of your work .

                     Nice layout and structured slides

                     very well planned

I don’t agree with my peers that said it was well planned because I think it was a little rushed , because I didn’t manage my time well enough

 

What Could The Presenter Develop In Terms Of Preparation ,Research Layout And Knowledge?

 

The majority of my peers said that I need to develop my concept , use a larger range of wet media (not just paint .)  I agree that I used too much paint , to improve I will research into other wet media that I could use in the future rather than just acrylic paint .

 

 

Action Plan

 

To develop my presentation skills I must ;

                     Learn to make points smaller.

                     Look at the audience more .

                     Make a more detailed plan which takes time management into account .

                     Add more images .

                     Make clearer links to the research with my recreations .

                     Learn my technical terms to give my work more meaning .

 

I will do this by practicing and rehearsing this presentation to other people , and I will learn to make smaller points by practicing my quotation and skim reading skills .

 

 

 

 

I decided to take the following tribes forward ;

Mongolian Tribe – Because I am interested in using the Mongolian gods for my concept somehow , and because the shapes on their marital dresses have a  unique silhouette and visually link to haute couture fashion which I have a keen interest in . And I love their compact patterns .

 

American Indian Tribe – Because I have a would like to use the idea of totem polls in my concept and also because their patterns are very refined and intriguing .

 

Aztec – Because I would like to include their symbolism , ritual and religion in  my concept somehow .

 

 

Concept – I am going to develop my concept before I decide how to visually express it in my designs . I would like to do something based around the gods of all these tribes , I might do this based on my own opinion concerning these religions and how they were so loyal to them and scared of the gods (sacrifices etc.,etc.) . 

 

Overall , I think that this project has been an interesting way to learn about these different sub-cultures of the world . However, I would have been much more intrigued by the project if I could have done Japanese Clans (tribes ) . Purely because I have an existing interest in the Japanese culture and I have primary sources at home which I could have used (Books ) .

But on the other hand I am excited for the up coming project and interested in how I am going to go about visually expressing and developing my concept .

 

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